Music Video Rough Cut 2 and
Feedback
Music Video
What Works Well
Lovely cutting to the beat
Some beautiful shots - panning and well composed shots - Kierann between Chris and Harriet!
Nice performance shots - just check out what is on the surrounding edges of the frame!
Even Better If
You ditched the curtains in the performance shots - check the outside of the frame
Check the lip sync throughout
Add more notebook scenes
Ditch the shot that tilts from under the bridge up - it is weird and the pole of the bridge is in Kierann's face
I've written wonky branch on my notes - does this mean anything to you as I am struggling to remember what I meant!
I hate the new shot of Kierann on the bench - the sun is in his face too much - either film again or go back to your previous shot
Clean up transitions a little - they can be a little jumpy at times
We want a longer shot of Kierann walking away at the end
Our group will use this feedback
in an effective way which will make sure that our music video becomes better
than the previous rough-cut. The first thing we will do from this feedback is
watch our music video and assess the standard of the artist’s lip syncing and
make sure that it is of high quality. This is because lip syncing in the
performance of our music video the lip syncing is one of the main features and
it is something that the audience will notice straight away if out of sequence.
We are going to get rid of the tilt shot from the bridge as our teacher advised
us to. To fill this empty spot as a group we will see if we are we can either
use spare footage we have or if it would be better to reshoot a performance
shot somewhere else as we are lacking them.
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